JordanKinsley's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Virtual Handgun]

Pretty Cool!

positive:
Visually .. it was Very good.
Great Sound quality
Good Animation and use of effects and filters.

negative:
I didn't like the unlock feature... I actually found my self just right clicking the flash and hitting play.. to sneak through to the locked weapons...

What I recommend:
Making an actual game out of this talent you have =)

Evilbright responds:

Well thanks for letting me know so I can disable right clicking in the app.
I get your point though I was battling with the unlock number cause 100 and 200 take a little while but 50 and 100 would just be too easy. I stayed with 100 and 200 cause I heard some pretty nice feedback on it. I appreciate your review

[Skateboard Sam alpha]

Horrible!!

negatives:
Walk Through Walls.. Walk in the air.. Glitch Tastic all arounnd! Art... Minimum Creativiity... A check mark for a finish line... Tons of Filters on text.. a stick figure flash... Need I say more?

positives:
music was good. it wasnt spam.

What I recommend:
Don't Submit Stuff when you know their are some things wrong with it. If you would have taken 2 hours of bug fixing, you probably could of had a decent game.

THEKRAIDSTER responds:

it sucks and has only 5 levels because... I PROCRASTINATED.

[Duck Hunt Remake 2]

great!!

super simple game play, game has been done before and it has been made better than this before too. your art was fantastic however.

6 months is a long time to make this simple game.

lucasnunes2 responds:

it's simple, i agree.
I worked 6 months because i don't have much time.
Then, i was making a little by week. : )

[Dots II]

awful

good graphics, smart cpu, no sounds, no music, not able to do 2 player.. Takes forever to make a line as well..

psyon responds:

Not able to do 2 player? There is a button for 2player mode.

[Tower Defence War]

it was ok

way too easy... monster grphics coulda been better

iovo responds:

Thanks for review. I'm still not ready with graphics, but will be great.

[Counter Fire Omega Beta]

I like it

It is a lot of fun. =)

1337studious responds:

thanks, i will be listing your name as a beta tester for the full game :)

[Flash 8 GUI Tutorial]

Not too great.

Text, Try using voices for tutorials, much nicer to listen than to read.
Unncessary Rollovers, That confused me why you had to do that.
Flash 8 is way old, Adobe has already finished CS4.
You used complicating terms, newcomers to flash will be confused even when they see what GUI ancronym.
I say it is better than some, but not as good as it could be.

Comicmanx responds:

I understand where you're coming from.
But I'm not that good with voiceovers, to be honest.
It seems nowadays Flash 8 would be the bare minimum to any flash, so it appeared a good start, seeing as that is what I currently have.

And I'll try stepping down my vocabulary, thanks for the review.

[CastleCrashing The Turtle]

Great Game!

Amazing Game Really, Level Up and Exp was a greaet Idea. Very Nice Tutorial, I like the difficulty settings. :D You did a lot. Great Work!
only thing I would suggest is make cleaner art work. But the art you had was Great as it is.

FlaskMan responds:

thanks for the review, and thanks for the criticism

[Horse Ranch 2]

no ending,,,,

fun and easy... however its depressing that thiers no ending...

StillBeatingPictures responds:

There is an ending, you just have to wait for it.
if you win 3 of each medals, when the season changes again and you go okay, it'll tell you that you win.
otherwise, after 5 seasons, it'll tell you you lose, unless your horse dies before that.

thanks for the review.

[AS3 Calculator]

use a better font

use a better font
or embed a custom one

this musta been fun to program :)
AS3.. how is it?

good newgrounds look :)

BrainToast responds:

AS3 is really hard

You know how buttons are just on the symbol like this:

on(release){
_root.gotoAndPlay(whatever);
}

In AS3 you have to do a really long code that I still can't memorize since I took lots of time in changing the script to make it work.